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The Fae Prince | 18 | Bloodlust

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I find amusement in the fact that the last one had an innocent title with mature content and this one has an ominous title with mostly harmless content. :giggle: Ok, it's also a little bit mature, but it isn't as graphic as the last one, so I just decided that this could go without a mature content filter. If you disagree please let me know so I can put one up.
Anyways, it's been a while. Not gonna lie, I've written on this chapter ever since I finished the last one but I was simply at a complete loss on where to go with the story from that point on. I have about 10 different half-written versions of this chapter laying around, so I actually DID write on it. A few days ago I eventually decided that I should just pick up the problems one by one and work through them, instead of throwing new stuff around. So I worked on the most recent problem: the hunting urge.

Turns out I don't need to write a lot of actual dialogue to get thigns going, like I thought I needed for months. An inner monolgue by Drako was all it took. And the muse kissed me yesterday, so that should be taken into consideration too. I wrote it in a way that is amusing, since I felt we were going quite dark already and I don't want to depress anyone here. You should enjoy reading this after all! :dummy: And I'll be honest: I had a BLAST writing Drako like this. He's slightly panicing and therefore overly sarcastic and complaining. He has the habit of doign that and I'm so glad that I remembered this little quirk of his, because this more lighthearted writing style was just what I needed, despite the gruesome topic! :heart:

Also, Caspana owners listen up, because this is EXACTLY what happens when you don't let your babies hunt and/or eat meat for longer than a week. Imitating it is not recommended!
At least Drako now got the jist of it! :phew:

And you might wonder about the enfield girl at the beginning, right? Her appearance was pretty random and pretty short, but I intend on using her again and having Drako recognize her, so her cameo had a purpose! c:<

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WolfLover87263's avatar
Sooo excited for th
enest chapter 😍