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I find amusement in the fact that the last one had an innocent title with mature content and this one has an ominous title with mostly harmless content. Ok, it's also a little bit mature, but it isn't as graphic as the last one, so I just decided that this could go without a mature content filter. If you disagree please let me know so I can put one up.
Anyways, it's been a while. Not gonna lie, I've written on this chapter ever since I finished the last one but I was simply at a complete loss on where to go with the story from that point on. I have about 10 different half-written versions of this chapter laying around, so I actually DID write on it. A few days ago I eventually decided that I should just pick up the problems one by one and work through them, instead of throwing new stuff around. So I worked on the most recent problem: the hunting urge.
Turns out I don't need to write a lot of actual dialogue to get thigns going, like I thought I needed for months. An inner monolgue by Drako was all it took. And the muse kissed me yesterday, so that should be taken into consideration too. I wrote it in a way that is amusing, since I felt we were going quite dark already and I don't want to depress anyone here. You should enjoy reading this after all! And I'll be honest: I had a BLAST writing Drako like this. He's slightly panicing and therefore overly sarcastic and complaining. He has the habit of doign that and I'm so glad that I remembered this little quirk of his, because this more lighthearted writing style was just what I needed, despite the gruesome topic!
Also, Caspana owners listen up, because this is EXACTLY what happens when you don't let your babies hunt and/or eat meat for longer than a week. Imitating it is not recommended!
At least Drako now got the jist of it!
And you might wonder about the enfield girl at the beginning, right? Her appearance was pretty random and pretty short, but I intend on using her again and having Drako recognize her, so her cameo had a purpose! c:<
Lilafly
Anyways, it's been a while. Not gonna lie, I've written on this chapter ever since I finished the last one but I was simply at a complete loss on where to go with the story from that point on. I have about 10 different half-written versions of this chapter laying around, so I actually DID write on it. A few days ago I eventually decided that I should just pick up the problems one by one and work through them, instead of throwing new stuff around. So I worked on the most recent problem: the hunting urge.
Turns out I don't need to write a lot of actual dialogue to get thigns going, like I thought I needed for months. An inner monolgue by Drako was all it took. And the muse kissed me yesterday, so that should be taken into consideration too. I wrote it in a way that is amusing, since I felt we were going quite dark already and I don't want to depress anyone here. You should enjoy reading this after all! And I'll be honest: I had a BLAST writing Drako like this. He's slightly panicing and therefore overly sarcastic and complaining. He has the habit of doign that and I'm so glad that I remembered this little quirk of his, because this more lighthearted writing style was just what I needed, despite the gruesome topic!
Also, Caspana owners listen up, because this is EXACTLY what happens when you don't let your babies hunt and/or eat meat for longer than a week. Imitating it is not recommended!
At least Drako now got the jist of it!
And you might wonder about the enfield girl at the beginning, right? Her appearance was pretty random and pretty short, but I intend on using her again and having Drako recognize her, so her cameo had a purpose! c:<
Lilafly
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© 2017 - 2024 Lilafly
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Sooo excited for th
enest chapter 😍
enest chapter 😍